This is a chapter I
wanted to have done at the beginning, or at least the middle of the week,
but work got so badly in the way that it wasn't possible. Or rather, it was, but I choose instead to
let my mind go after work instead of focus my thoughts. Today, I actually only had about two
paragraphs of notes to take on the summary of what happened and then digest
it all myself, generally the hardest part of all, which is why I delayed it so
long. But now that I'm back into it, it's great - a chapter where I can love Mat for a few seconds and shake my head at
Perrin and be frustrated with Rand.
Perrin being "too sick" to go out and be adventurous because of a bad dream, hmm... Looking back, why do I have a hard time with this? It just doesn't settle right with me. I guess maybe one of the three had to stay back and it obviously couldn't be Rand, nor did it fit Mat's character, and Perrin was a little…wimpier? It just doesn't fit - to me at least. Perrin was strong and stubborn enough to not partake of the "drink" that was offered, but couldn't manage to get out of bed afterwards even go to exploring, when he's pointedly told Thom that they've explored some of the strangest areas of their country? Okay.
Scene with Min -
perfection. So much foreshadowing, no
one can remember it all, and speculation ran rampant throughout the series -
runs still for some of the images Min saw that day. We already know that I love how Jordan uses
prophesy and foreshadowing, and here he sets up how he will use it in a
different way throughout the series.
Jordan also does well how he sets up Min's character and first
conversation with Rand. Again, I am in
awe - I am also left remembering, she is one character who has not once annoyed
me. How could Jordan write her female
character so well, and yet struggle with the others?
The thing that
upsets me the most - and I suppose had to happen in this chapter - is when Rand
tells Padan Fain where they are staying and
agrees not to tell Moraine he has seen Padan Fain. Doesn't Rand find it at all suspicious that
Fain ran away from him or even that he looks a lot worse for wear or that he's
rambling like he's insane? Also, Rand was just the night before told not to trust
anyone. The first time I read the book
it annoyed me as well. My husband
defends it a little by saying "well, hadn't Padan Fain been going to
Edmond's Field for as long as Rand could remember?" Well sure - but
still! Padan Fain disappeared that night, and
see all of the reasons I listed above as to why he shouldn't trust him - and
I'd even say anyone from Two River's that randomly appeared in the same
circumstances (disappeared Winternight, running away from him in town, looking
poorly, rambling) shouldn't be trusted.
But, as I said before, probably just one of the dots that needed to be
connected - and Rand was a trusting sort…I suppose - although he doesn't trust
Moraine, but that's because she's a stranger?
The scene that causes Mat to say "You aren't sick…you are crazy!" I love that scene! It sets up so beautifully some clues that
have been laid down for the reader as well as expresses Mat's character. It also introduces another character, but not
even noticeably, more of a "oh by and by…" The scene is full of, not hidden agendas so
much as the fact that Jordan had laid out his plot and was now filling in the
outline with the richness of the story.
For a small example - the Heron marked blade is now verified as being a
blade to be wary of: it seems a little different now that it's verified by a source
outside of Lan.
There is more to the
chapter, but these were the few scenes that stood out to me the most. The Wisdom
is next and I hope I don't take nearly as much time getting my notes input into
the computer this go around.
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